by boxwoodsub
This is an outstanding story. The verbal byplay between Acacia and the sub at the party was a beautiful dom/sub seduction and was a genuine pleasure to read. I am surprised there are not more comments. I think a lot of people expect a mechanically elaborate scene, the kind that Acacia was pointedly trying to avoid. Great work!. Please continue it.
An outstanding story. I wonder if there really could be a woman like Acacia to give myself to.
It was just superb ... the control exercised was simply out of the world. I doubt if there are women of this character?
Really enjoyed this story, good plot, simple readable sentences.
What you write is what i see ! That's how stotty should be written
Your writing is literate and original with subtle tones. More please.
I hope you will find time to continue this - I enjoyed it immensely
Barring a few quibbles, which I will send via "Send Feedback". Adult, eschewing cliches. Good start--keep writing!