by Ashson
So was the girl named Trudi or Traci?? "Tell me, do you think the hero would finish up taking the girl's dress of(f), getting her naked?" Other instances also, detracting from your story.
Few spelling errors, but very well paced. I liked that she was pissed off and fighting back. That made the fantasy hotter for me.
Throughly enjoyed the undressed rehearsal . Full marks. *****
I have to admit this had me wet and wanting more. You are an amazing writer and I love the spanking. A nice spanking among a man his woman is always nice to fantasize about. ;)
A little way in, Trudi changed to Traci. Probably has multiple personality disorder.