All Comments on 'Act It Out'

A little way in, Trudi changed to Traci. Probably has multiple personality disorder.

I have to admit this had me wet and wanting more. You are an amazing writer and I love the spanking. A nice spanking among a man his woman is always nice to fantasize about. ;)

You and my vibrator make a lovely pair.

You always deliver.

Always w/ the sun dresses.

she said NO several times. TK U MLJ LV NV

Her name changed

Throughly enjoyed the undressed rehearsal . Full marks. *****

Few spelling errors, but very well paced. I liked that she was pissed off and fighting back. That made the fantasy hotter for me.

So was the girl named Trudi or Traci?? "Tell me, do you think the hero would finish up taking the girl's dress of(f), getting her naked?" Other instances also, detracting from your story.