by sweetbeauty28752
I have no desire to control anyone or be controlled by anyone so the stories where the “Mistress” is not a ruthless bitch is nicer too read. To me anyway.
Beautiful! Obviously most of the prior commets are from guys ignorant of the connection in the story. As a submissive thank you for capturing something more than the sex.
Bullshit I wish someone would try to control
ME fuck that this fucking ridiculous mistress
My ass she stupid as hell HATED IT I HATE
THESE STORIES ABOUT BEING CONTROLLED
WHAT THE HELL
Still one of my favorites. Can't stop reading it . Hope you write more parts.
I loved the story. It is wonderful to see and feel such love and caring between two women. Mistress/slave/lovers. Hmmmm, very nice combination.
Ignore that first comment ("shouldnt this be in bdsm?"). Stories can cross genres, and this is very appropriate for the lesbian category. You have a wonderful sense of eroticism in your writing, and I look forward to reading more from you.
After the first "mistress" lost interest. After first "slap" I stopped reading. The title should be "A Submissives Love Story", so readers will know type of story they are about to read.
The writing for this story was excellent! I especially loved the description of the beautiful nude girl as she lay over her mistresses lap to get her gorgeous ass spanked. That was nice!
On the negative side, I could have done without the guys in this story. I'd rather read about a dominant mistress enjoying her beautiful female slavegirl's lovely body without any guys around to notice.