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All Comments on 'Adventure in Longwood Day 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Thanks

Enjoyable. Different.

gunnycdcgunnycdcover 13 years ago
your writing

I have enjoyed the first two chapters of your story, and hope you continue with it. The only thing i want to add is that you need to work on your punctuation. Commas, semi-colons, and periods. They make the story much more readable. Keep up the good work emap.

NekoParksNekoParksabout 11 years ago
Sorry-- forgot to vote when I left a comment.

Wonderful story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Firefight??

Firefights started in Viet Nam. Gun Fights were the old west. Good series, enjoying the read.

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