All Comments on 'Adventure in Longwood Day 02'

Firefights started in Viet Nam. Gun Fights were the old west. Good series, enjoying the read.

Wonderful story.

I have enjoyed the first two chapters of your story, and hope you continue with it. The only thing i want to add is that you need to work on your punctuation. Commas, semi-colons, and periods. They make the story much more readable. Keep up the good work emap.

Enjoyable. Different.