All Comments on 'Adventure in Paradise'

by GWBosh

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Exquisite!

But I really think this wonderful story should be in the romance category (even if there is some anal here). The great connection between Sarah and Al is filled with genuine Love on top of the obvious physical attraction. You have a wonderful way of writing, GWBosh! I will certainly check out your other stories! And please keep on writing!! / ExMonk

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Magnificent

One of the best I have ever had the pleasure to find. It brought back memories of my own past and the lovely lady I was fortunate enough to love...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Thank god

Thank god for a man who uses what the good lord gave him,,,,, his brain and Google to figure out her business to the south!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
A true love story

There is erotica and then there is a love story...and this most certainly covered all bases...absolutely magnificent read.

daggettdaggettover 13 years ago
A Great Story

Very enjoyable. Sexy with well described and fleshed out characters. A fantastic read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow!!

This is definitely the best story I've read on Literotica... maybe the best anywhere!! Keep writing!!

Thank you,

Lori

Txmanblue60Txmanblue60almost 11 years ago
Beautiful, sensual, moving story

Beautifully written story that captures the reader and holds them through to the end. Sensual, exciting sex written naturally into the flow, of the story. One of the best on this entire site.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Amazing thank you.

J6480J6480about 1 year ago

Well crafted and believable unlike much of the other stuff here. Keep at 5/5

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