All Comments on 'Adventure in Paradise'

Well crafted and believable unlike much of the other stuff here. Keep at 5/5

Amazing thank you.

Beautifully written story that captures the reader and holds them through to the end. Sensual, exciting sex written naturally into the flow, of the story. One of the best on this entire site.

This is definitely the best story I've read on Literotica... maybe the best anywhere!! Keep writing!!

Thank you,

Lori

Very enjoyable. Sexy with well described and fleshed out characters. A fantastic read.

There is erotica and then there is a love story...and this most certainly covered all bases...absolutely magnificent read.

Thank god for a man who uses what the good lord gave him,,,,, his brain and Google to figure out her business to the south!!!!!!

One of the best I have ever had the pleasure to find. It brought back memories of my own past and the lovely lady I was fortunate enough to love...

But I really think this wonderful story should be in the romance category (even if there is some anal here). The great connection between Sarah and Al is filled with genuine Love on top of the obvious physical attraction. You have a wonderful way of writing, GWBosh! I will certainly check out your other stories! And please keep on writing!! / ExMonk