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All Comments on 'Adventures of Hollywood Jim Ch. 31'

by hollywoodjim

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Mojo648Mojo648about 4 years ago
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What happened to the rest of this chapter?

Disappointed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Make sure when you start to write the next chapter, start by following on from the last chapter, A story should just flow from 1 chapter into the next one

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

You do a great job of adding so much detail that people forget the countless mistakes in the important parts.

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