All Comments on 'Adventures of Trisha'

An interesting plot and story well told without the all too often errors of spelling, punctuation and grammar. I limited this to three stars but want to encourage the author to continue writing as I believe, from her biography, she is young and limited in her experience of life - something than can be easily overcome with time. What made the story unrealistic for me, and I suspect many, is the unbelievable resources that any law enforcement agency could devote to the apprehension of a lone stalker and the belief that anyone would have the energy to work an early shift in a busy restaurant before starting in a new full time job in a law office.

The story was worth four stars the writing not so much. You show good potential as a storyteller but you need someone to help you with editing or you need to do some very heavy self editing. Good luck.

After the first story they get much better.Good luck!!