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by collegegurl72

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
must be

This author must be new or uninformed as to proper slang. Fast education, its "cum/cumming" when referring to semen/orgasm NOT 'COME' so either learn the correct slang or don't post stories.

LoveMenLoveSexLoveMenLoveSexalmost 10 years ago
Slang isn't the be-all and end-all of writing

In response to the previous comment, I'd like to say that it makes ZERO difference which spelling one chooses to use in an erotic (or any adult fiction) story. An intelligent reader will gather the meaning from the context and won't be either upset or confused by the use of the correctly spelled word rather than the slang.

In regards to your story, collegegurl72, a little more expansion of the situations would have made it more enjoyable but you got your point across quite adequately, spelling choices not even noticed ;)

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