All Comments on 'Affair with Aiden'

by redhairedvixen

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Short and sexy.

I hope this is the first part of a series!

mountaincat4mountaincat4about 8 years ago
A good first effort

This story was believable because it sounds like you wrote it from personal experience. Glad to see young women who aren't inhibited about responding to a young man that turns them on. First date (or was it really a date?) sex used to get a girl a 'reputation'. Hope those days are long gone. Keep writing.

TheIrishTuxTheIrishTuxabout 8 years ago
Great first foray!

I second MountainCat in that it sounds a lot like you drew from personal experience for this, which in my opinion makes for much more passionate and intense writing. I too am happy to see a woman be so easily able to express such raw desire. Spot on and keep up the good work!

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