by redhairedvixen
I second MountainCat in that it sounds a lot like you drew from personal experience for this, which in my opinion makes for much more passionate and intense writing. I too am happy to see a woman be so easily able to express such raw desire. Spot on and keep up the good work!
This story was believable because it sounds like you wrote it from personal experience. Glad to see young women who aren't inhibited about responding to a young man that turns them on. First date (or was it really a date?) sex used to get a girl a 'reputation'. Hope those days are long gone. Keep writing.