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by elphaba69

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chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
Is This A Page??

Out of your diary.

MitchFraellMitchFraellabout 10 years ago
So - So

We all have days like this but does that make it a story?

DeKreDeKreover 8 years ago
A story?

Yes, I think it is a story.

Actually, it would be a nice story if you could make up your mind whether to write in the first or the third person.

DeKreDeKreover 6 years ago
who is she?

You should make up your mind if you want to write in the first or third person. It is a bit confusing.

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