All Comments on 'After Class'

Poorly executed.

Awful, just awful. There is nothing erotic or non consensual about this drivel.

A story cannot be about non consent/reluctance if there is no non consent/reluctance. She was ready for whatever he gave her from the get go. This should have been under erotic couplings at best. However, don't be discouraged by negative feedback. Keep writing just maybe look into an editor.

I liked it but it could've been better but please keep trying and take your time add more to the start instead of just heading into the sex with a small paragraph i'd add a full class session but that is what I'd do so please continue to make stories I'll make sure to read them

yes would like a bit of force like to think he knock her up.