by inviolate
Wow, this is a very good 1st chapter,
I already can't wait for the next one!
There's potential, but such an abbreviated chapter makes it difficult to evaluate.
-- KK in Texas
to make me want to read more. From this chapter I have a sense of the time period, that this woman is in love with a man that does not know it, and that they have been life long friends. I do not think that the man, if he was so angry, would wait for the woman to inquire about his mood. But that could be just the manners of the time. I do wonder what he is steamed about.
Where will this go? Consider me intrigued. Here's looking forward to your next post.