All Comments on 'Afternoon Tea Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great, I'm hooked already!

Wow, this is a very good 1st chapter,

I already can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
well..........

There's potential, but such an abbreviated chapter makes it difficult to evaluate.

-- KK in Texas

renaissancequeenrenaissancequeenalmost 15 years ago
Good enough ...

to make me want to read more. From this chapter I have a sense of the time period, that this woman is in love with a man that does not know it, and that they have been life long friends. I do not think that the man, if he was so angry, would wait for the woman to inquire about his mood. But that could be just the manners of the time. I do wonder what he is steamed about.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
hmmmm. . .

Where will this go? Consider me intrigued. Here's looking forward to your next post.

HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderalmost 3 years ago

Damn good start! Definitely going to read more.

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