All Comments on 'Afternoon Tea Ch. 01'

Damn good start! Definitely going to read more.

Where will this go? Consider me intrigued. Here's looking forward to your next post.

to make me want to read more. From this chapter I have a sense of the time period, that this woman is in love with a man that does not know it, and that they have been life long friends. I do not think that the man, if he was so angry, would wait for the woman to inquire about his mood. But that could be just the manners of the time. I do wonder what he is steamed about.

There's potential, but such an abbreviated chapter makes it difficult to evaluate.

-- KK in Texas

Wow, this is a very good 1st chapter,

I already can't wait for the next one!