by inviolate
This was an amazing story. Loooved it! Just the right amount of romance and sex. Far better than most published works I've read before. I really, really hope you write more!
One of the best stories I have read here. I just wish you hadn't divided it into parts.
Wonderfully written. Love and lust so masterfully and satisfyingly balanced. I don't get why people keep complaining about it being in parts. They're just lazy.
What a wonderful story. I cannot believe that this story was posted in Literotica. This story should have been expanded throughout the body and published, and/or made into a movie script. I only wish that at the end of the story it would had been noticed that she was already carrying his child. My thanks to the writer for such a worderful write.
5 stars on all parts. LOVED it! But....
When're ya gonna do a sequel? :)