All Comments on 'Afternoon Tea Ch. 07'

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PennLadyPennLadyalmost 15 years ago
Very sweet :)

I do love a happy ending. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Delightful!

Wonderful storytelling!

-- KK in Texas

sol76sol76almost 15 years ago
Great Stuff

Great Tale, Keep Writing I would love to read more.

madgirl_15madgirl_15almost 15 years ago
Fantastic!

This was an amazing story. Loooved it! Just the right amount of romance and sex. Far better than most published works I've read before. I really, really hope you write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
GOOD STORY... but

One of the best stories I have read here. I just wish you hadn't divided it into parts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Fantastical

Wonderfully written. Love and lust so masterfully and satisfyingly balanced. I don't get why people keep complaining about it being in parts. They're just lazy.

xiluaxiluaabout 9 years ago
found it in Literotica...Really?

What a wonderful story. I cannot believe that this story was posted in Literotica. This story should have been expanded throughout the body and published, and/or made into a movie script. I only wish that at the end of the story it would had been noticed that she was already carrying his child. My thanks to the writer for such a worderful write.

HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderalmost 3 years ago

5 stars on all parts. LOVED it! But....

When're ya gonna do a sequel? :)

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