by lovebubbles22
WAAAAAAAYYYYYYY too many spelling and grammar mistakes ... I made it to paragraph two before I gave up
Wrong words (All correctly spelled), but still wrong. For example 'known' instead of 'none'. Seriously distract from following plot.
This sounds absolutely horrifying. Burning his flesh and urethra? That would be beyond painful. He may cum from the stimulation, but I don't think it would even be possible for him to feel any pleasure with that much pain.