All Comments on 'AI Reward and Punishment'

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kindzazakindzazaabout 10 years ago

Good start,but short.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
too many spelling and grammar mistakes

WAAAAAAAYYYYYYY too many spelling and grammar mistakes ... I made it to paragraph two before I gave up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Needs Editing

Wrong words (All correctly spelled), but still wrong. For example 'known' instead of 'none'. Seriously distract from following plot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

This sounds absolutely horrifying. Burning his flesh and urethra? That would be beyond painful. He may cum from the stimulation, but I don't think it would even be possible for him to feel any pleasure with that much pain.

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