All Comments on 'Aidan and Alexandra'

Loved the story but it became somewhat confusing because of the mixed up tenses. One minute you are in the present and the next you are in the past.

I thought that was really good. Although, it was sad, I'd really like you to continue this. :)

Again, a very good, if not tragic story. I must agree about the wording. You do well in some lines, and fall short in others.

Continue this storyline, please. But, for the sheer enjoyment of the story, please consider a fair- if not good- editor. Thanks!

Such a tragic story i love it!! I really don't care for the wording... This story was no IS great I hope you make this into chapters!!! Please continue. Soon!!!!!

good but too much unnecessary violence you didn't need to make him out to be such a violent asshole

the guy was such an asshole no way she would ever want to see him again this story was in the wrong catagory it belongs in the trash catagory do us a favor and stop writing

also if she didn't want any family to find out about the micarriage then why did her friend call him and how did he get his number in the first place good as a first draft fails as a posted story get a good editor and do a rewrite

I really loved your story, Adain was great and so was Alexandra. I hate that she lost her baby thats so sad. :(

Adain was such an ass to his sister for not believeing her. I hope you make another chapter.

BTW for thoes of you how dont like the story, grow some balls and dont put is as Anonymous if your gonna hate.

Very good but you should follow it up as to how it ended you have left a lot of people. Hanging you should do more please