All Comments on 'Aimee Gets Tricked'

by hmanmachine

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AethurAethuralmost 6 years ago
Loved it.

Fun little tale. There's something about women being tricked into fucking that I just find very enjoyable. 5* from me.

Personally, I don't feel this should be a series. It was great as it was, but I have the feeling that it would just turn into her enjoying it and she'll keep on cheating, willingly. To me it shines as a short flash story. As a series, it will just end up straying into the LW category. Even if she's reluctant, moving forward, this either ends with him winning her over, or a bad ending for the man.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 6 years ago
Blackmail Stories Annoy Me

But this: "You said you put on a condom, you son of a bitch," she yelled. "Yah, about that, I kind of lied" - that entertains me. The difference is that her own dishonesty and corruption is what enabled her to be tricked. She was a willing participant in her own downfall.

Tricking people who deserve it makes a clever and fun story. Blackmail, on the other hand, is dirty pool and not fun.

Just my take on things. I thought it was a good story and well-written, if a bit short. You have talent as a writer and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Grant66Grant66almost 6 years ago
Very good. Now we need Aimee being blackmailed

Thanks for a short and very good story.

I think most of your readers will agree with me that we want to read Aimee knowingly being forced to have sex with her former 'friend' because he's blackmailing her.

I hope you don't mind a suggestion: Perhaps Aimee resists but this only gives her 'friend' reason to make it harder on her. Maybe by humiliating her by making her wear sluty clothes and even a collar in public. Maybe by letting other guys (and women?) fuck her or her 'friend' DP her with someone she knows like a coworker. Having a office manager or corporate executive forced to behave like a slut for her male subordinate would be hot. Thanks again,

hmanmachinehmanmachinealmost 6 years agoAuthor
First Submission

My first submission in this genre. I hope you enjoy it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantastic story but it needs a sequel

Hope more is to come. i'd really like to see her become pregnant by blackmail and/or be forced into a threeway with another female

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