All Comments on 'Airplane Humiliaiton'

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mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 11 years ago
Not bad at all, but ...

... it would have been even better had it not had a typo in the title ;( !

These things might seem small to you when you're actually writing but they are very important to your readers; if you want to keep them, you will have to try a little harder to satisfy them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
OMG

Your from New York. The Burlington Coat Factory Store your talking about is in Five Towns nears JFK Airport it's off a road that leads to the airport. Love the story it was Hot. I came twice. Could have been longer. Can't wait for more to this story to come.

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