All Comments on 'Aisha & Paul Ch. 03'

I've been waiting for more of Aisha and Paul. I loved the story cant wait to see where you go from here.

MORE!!!

Can't wait to see what happens.

*I must have more....I have waited for almost a year for this storyline to continue...DON'T MAKE ME WAIT AGAIN PLEASE!!!!!!!!

I want to know what happens. Please hurry and write some more!!!!

Please write an ending to their story. My mind is going crazy thinking about what could be.

pleasse get more Aisha and Paul.It's wonderful.

You just have to update. You can't leave a sista hangin like that. Please Please update.

Please tell me chapter 3 isn't the last one. The story can't end there...we need more!!!

don't leave us hanging like this, please finish the rest of the story...........

You have to tell us how it ends!!! I have to know!

WOW....I am so hooked and cannot wait to see what happens next.....dont keep us all hanging....

Where is the rest?

This is too fucking hot!!!!

are you going to finish this???

Sir I have you to know that I would have enjoyed this short story a lot more had it not been for the subtle racist undertones. I couldn't even finish this story. I'd actually gotten to the club scene where several generalizations were made about blacks and I refused to continue. For example in your words, the encompassing blatant sexuality of "black clubs" and Aisha's counter nature of your idea of a stereotypical oversexed, "displaced African." This story could have been a lot better.

I need an update on this story!Despite the undertone of racial profiling, it was hot and sexy and i cant wait for the rest because i know you wont leave a sista hanging like that.

"too much of anything makes you an addict.."

WTF?!? I know that this is a white guy's fantasy set to paper, but it's hot, and we want to know what happened! Come on, now!

I really am in to this story. It has a little bit of everything... passion, curiosity, conflict, and humor.

I am assuming that you will not update, based upon the date of your last update. Life comes at you fast and you can easily be distracted. However, if you get a moment, I'm sure we would all love to see how this turns out for them.

Take care.

Thanks for sharing!

this story!

This was great!!! You really should finish this. I can't wait to see what happen.

I want more.

More please ! ! !

And you stop the story just as the REAL drama happens. It would be wrong as two left shoes if you don't update soon. This is not TV, allow your imagination to soar. Creativity is requested just a tad bit faster and for more pages. Life happens, but your fans will become restless.

Kinda disappointed that Aisha is a typical dumb full of c.. character. You know they say don’t hate the player hate the game but in this case the player sucks fish ballz. This is not a love match or even a romantic encounter, this is reality for many men who wants the cake and eats it to but in piss poor taste. I hope both characters stub their toes daily😁 never read a fictional story that made me feel like damn these people deserve each other and not in a good way.