All Comments on 'Aisha's Sexual Vacation Ch. 01'

I can't wait for the next chapter to see what the father and uncle do next. I love how you came so hard for them, two more weeks. Yes! I love this story! You have some of the best ideas here!

Promises to be very interesting indeed. I look forward to this continuation!

And as you obviously enjoy writing these stories, you might also enjoy reading a few of mine.

Kisses.

Many Feathers

But there were so many spelling errors and run on sentences that it was comical. Please get an editor!

GROSS!!!!

You should have kicked them that's just wrong!!!!

Good story. Did you proof read this before submitting. The grammical errors made it hard for me to understand. On your next story try proof reading before submitting. Keep up the work.

Very very sexy! Reading it had really turned me on. The pleasure of betrayal and to what possibly may be a new experience for her. Enjoyed the story and to what great detail you went into. Few grammar errors, but besides that a very sexy piece. Made it easy to visualize it all from start to finish.

Story is so hot....