All Comments on 'Alex in Wonderland Ch. 02'

by Johnboy9

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mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggover 9 years ago
A leetle bit over the top, perhaps?

But oh, how entertaining!

cdpervcdpervover 9 years ago
more

Alice sounds fun, please continue.

creekbankcreekbankover 9 years ago
LOVE IT!!!

please keep the chapters coming....great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
That Rabbit Hole could be Very Deep

I have a feeling I'll be checking regularly to see how far down the Hole "Alice" falls! As Mumble put it.... Oh, so entertaining!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more pleeese

Loved it, looking forward to more please.

InosolanInosolanover 9 years ago
MORE!

moremoremore

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
mmmmm Alice

you have to keep this going, sooo many adventures for little Alex/Alice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
great

I'd loveeee for you to continue this story.

JessicaKoxJessicaKoxabout 6 years ago
Why

Why did this wonderful story stop?

Please do more

TailChaser69TailChaser69over 5 years ago
So much potential in this one...

Looks like the writing bug has either got up and left, or perhaps it has moved into other realms. Either way, this was a nice start to what could have been an interesting storyline, there's still loads of room for innovation in the 'male' model genre. Involving a sibling as a guide or mentor opens up a lot of opportunities.

AnonymousAnonymous5 days ago

One of the best stories I ever read but I wish someday that you would finish it

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