All Comments on 'Alexandra's Friend'

I liked the story. You have the author of Seansmom13 giving the impression of it being written by a woman. You goofed in your deception! When he broke her hymen, you did not have her with a typical female reaction. You also emphasized the "activities" of a male. If I were you, I would write under a "guy's" name. Yes, use these two characters. You have a good technique but be honest in your presentation.

My username is actually a private joke between friends. I'm actually a guy and wrote based on what I thought would be my perspective in the situation. Thank you for the comment.