All Comments on 'Alexa's Journey Ch. 01'

Part 2 would be nice

I like how the story starts and builds slowly...(don't know how prevalent bullying is in real life but it's commonplace in certain types of stories) as Alexa experiences her world with the additional challenges that packin' a penis brings with it. Need more strory to see how Alexa responds to her new male/female relationship versus her previous female/female desires. Maybe she can like 'em both. We'll see, I hope.

The background and slow build were really good. Great story. I understand that you changed from 1st person to 3rd person telling the story. You missed some changes. I enjoyed the story even though the grammar has a lot of errors. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Anal takes longer when done properly but the intensity of the orgasm is worth it. Your build up leading to their first encounter matched it well and had me throbbing and wet!

Very well thought out, written, and presented. Continue on please.