All Comments on 'Alex's Awesome Party'

by EllenHudson

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max052max052about 13 years ago
SO?

Yeah, then what happened? (grins)

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 13 years ago
Would have loved more detail

This story could have been so sexy if the author had taken the time to paint some word pictures of these events, rather than just providing an overview. You have some sexy ideas. Just flesh them out more.

daddygoesdeepdaddygoesdeepabout 13 years ago
loved it

the only thing wrong with this story is its too short

beachin_itbeachin_itabout 13 years ago
my facebook friends aren't nearly this cool!

maybe i have to move to New York!

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