All Comments on 'Alicia's New Position Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Sad, unerotic and depressing. But that's what this writer writes about. So nothing new here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
GREAT start to 2012...

AWESOME!!! Fuck the critics, you write perfectly! Chapter 12 arrives on the 12th, nice timing...perhaps chapter 13 can arrive tomorrow on the 13th?!? I love this new plot, it has great potential...keep it cum~ing!!! :-D

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Poor critics

Seems some of the readers have a problem with the interracial genre. This writer has said many times pure fiction the only thing here that is not interresting or erotic is the same critical comments, move on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Interesting turn

I have before suggested that the main character had fuzzy motivation to be doing all the things she wa doing. I think having her find that her finding a partner who had some compassion to him would be a good end and the new direction might get us there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Bring on Dr Val Myers ....

It will be intereting to see how Val and Ali hookup! Getting hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
more

racist crap

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Ready for Chapter 13

When is chapter 13 cuming?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Chapter 13

Hurry up and write chapter 13!!!

teganslutteganslutover 11 years ago
???

That's it? This story ever gonna have an end?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Can't end like this......... Ali has to end up doing Val,,,,,,,,,,Val has a hungry snail as well maybe..........msybe she wears a anklet on her right ankle and has an "ace of spades Tat on her leg................ Maybe she has a boyfriend named Joe............ This needs to go on and on and on and on.......................

handaJizzhandaJizzover 10 years ago
just had to write n say

How sorry i am to hear about how you Americans are having your birth control rationed. I read in the newspaper its something called 'Obama care' That's where your president Bareback Obama (forgive me if i spelt his name wrong) wants to see every white middle class American woman knocked up with black babies. Or something like that

jodiredjodiredalmost 10 years ago
Fiction, but.......

Obviously this is a work of fiction, but people need to understand that the story's developments are not THAT far from reality for some women. It IS possible to become addicted to Black Cock, and to be virtually unable to resist eagerly surrendering to ANY Black Man who makes a pass. I am like that. I manage to control it when the consequences of my behavior would mean discovery by my husband, but I have taken some incredible changes to fuck with Black Men that i just met only moments ago. So white men should know that it IS possible for Alicia to be YOUR wife!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Dr. Valerie Myers needs counselling from Marcus

Marcus gets Ali to admit who was counselling her after an ass reddening spanking. Ali apologizes profusely for lying to Marcus and shows him the journal she has kept for Dr. Valerie Myers and the crushing $300 in cash payments she makes for each visit. Marcus considers Valerie a racist bitch and plans her downfall by bringing along a dominant black woman to crash the session. The receptionist tries to stop them and is KO unconscious on the floor. Valerie walks out the office and is pulled by the hair and bitch slapped on face before being made to kneel on the floor to listen to Ali's account of her sessions which are surprisingly critical of her therapy sessions.

Ali talks about the crushing debt payments and Valerie offers to repay Ali for all treatments only to be bitch slapped multiple times on the face. Marcus men pick up the unconscious secretary away for her initiation training and Valerie is put under inquisition about her racial feelings for blacks and ordered to discard expensive clothing, bras and panties as she tearfully apologizes by giving up her Rolex watch and gold ring to her Black Mistress before being told to start licking her Black pussy.

The Black Mistress asks Ali what she would like Valerie to-do and she says Valerie needs to suck off Marcus who is sitting on her leather chair with an engorged cock for Valerie to start sucking with her red hair held tight and close toothed offered Black cock by her Black Mistress 's strong hand with the other stronger hand poised to punch her harder on her muscular back until total compliance is achieved.

After a couple of hours of hard intensive discipline, Valerie is broken down to submit submissively to pleasuring both Marcus and her Black Mistress who initiates her into lesbianism. Her secretary shoes up dressed as a slut and makes her lick her clitoris while shaming her former boss and announcing with a gleaming of her eyes her plans for disciplining Valerie before she is made to fuck Marcus in front of her. Sleeves cut off her blouse by her secretary, Valerie is taken to be slut trained by her former secretary.

Finally, the Black Mistress calls her sister who is a qualified therapist to take over Valerie's business and she brings her Black secretary to help run the business without help of Valerie's former secretary to quickly sort out the patient list of many white mother's and their daughters to target them to resume therapy sessions with the new black therapist by giving the daughters conflicting and guilt based advice to submit to Black men by calling their mothers racists for objecting to their new lifestyle

The guilt racked mother's will get disciplined therapy aimed at getting them naked to crawl on floor to sate their black mistress on leather chair while being caned on reddening ass by Black secretary. Daughters take others over for their first suck and fuck sessions with well endowed Black men.

Ali is pleased with the transformational changes she has created for black people as she slaps Valerie's reddening ass.

Sweetnothings77Sweetnothings77over 3 years ago
When you know you different

Its when you have been with SOooo Many Mens that you know from talking with you friends you different by the things you do or done or let be done on you. Like when you have So much SEX so regular its hard to put a stop on it and not have none. Its like a Drug between these legs when I wasnt high or drunk a little I just had to have some one IN me and when I feeled them Nutt and CUM IN me that would ALWAYS Trigger my Pussy to POP and give me a Orgasm. Specialy with Black Mens and a Dominant Black Man.

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