All Comments on 'All About Vanessa'

Vanessa I hope you had the men use condoms for protection

and i hope you had yourself checked by a doctor for stds I hope you write more chapters It was a blast.

Pat .

Atlanta,Ga

The rating isn't for any other reason than it was very abrupt and the story on the whole was not told with any style. It read more like an event took place and it was fun, and that is all. It's a solid story line, but take your time and write a more elaborate and detailed account.

I enjoyed the rather short story and would have loved more details. It is not often one gets to read a story about a beauty taking three big black men over and over again and I would have loved to have been there to watch. Lucky you, submit12 to have seen your girlfriend and her partying crowd going wild on each other over and over again. Tell us more, next time with more explicit details. Thank you.