All Comments on 'All About Zack Ch. 01'

When your husband's a wimp, oh well let Zack have his fun if hubbie can't figure out how to handle a 18 year old little punk. I spose a kid is one the way also. Only on Lit.

Can't wait for the next part.

Excellent first chapter. I can't wait to read the next.

As an author myself, I liked the way you developed the interplay between husband and wife, letting the reader imagine what went on between the wife and her brother-in-law to be. Then introducing the nephew and having him possess a copy of the video tape made for her husband's enjoyment, much to their mutual consternation.

I can see where this story has several intersting posibilities as it develops. I hope you do this first segment justice. I gave this a top rating.

Paris Waterman

Well paced, well written and gripping. The dialogue was superb. I had the actress from Educating Rita in midn while reading it, rather than Kate Bush, perhaps because of the smoking. Thanks for such a good read.

Yes & no. For sure, this is a damm good read.

Utterly fantastic story, beautifully written and so erotic. I'm going to devour this series, it has much personal significence for me.

Waiting for the next installment.

Loving the story but why the hell did they give him the tape in the first place???

18 year old kid: Hi I don't have any evidence to blackmail you with other than some stuff I overheard ... would you give me all the evidence I need? Thanks.

Presumably intelligent adults: Um we really don't want to but I guess so ... here.

Awful read. The story line is pathetic. Hard to read due to the plot of the story.

Very exciting, extremely erotic. Adding you to my favorite authors and this story to my favorite stories. Keep up the great work, PLEASE!