All Comments on 'All Along the Crooked Way'

I loved it, please let this continue :)

Powerful, seductive, entwining.

These characters are very engaging, and you write beautifully. Please write some more!

I love the way you wrote the dialogue, even the internal narration. Imagery goes a long way, and there is much of that to be enjoyed here as well, but really good dialogue does so much to charge a scene and this whole story was fully charged. Awesome.