All Comments on 'All Bark & Little Bite Ch. 03'

keep spinning that web! great the way you slowly draw reader in.

Stupid turn of events in what was becoming a very good romance story. It seems that the mere mention of her exhusband's name causes her to forget her budding romance and she then deals out the same sort of treatment her ex meted out to her. I guess we can forget the love stoy and look for her to go with a twisted reverse revenge taking her anger out on Donald.

Nice continuation as Saundra draws Donald into her web. You've got quality here developing the powerful eroticism in the changing roles between Donald & Saundra. She pulls him teasingly along and he already feels power flipping from his grasp.

That little bit about her ex- is well placed, portending further complications as this tale progresses. What would a good story be without life's little complications?

My only complaint is that this series has been around for so long and it's STILL not done. No wonder there doesn't appear to be much of a hard core following. Ah well, do it the best you can - I for one will be here.