All Comments on 'Allie and Friends at the Beach'

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10towers10towersover 7 years ago
What an outstanding writer

Well done, and I'll have to read your other works. This is the first time I have read one of your stories. With your unusual pen name, you are easy to relocate with a Google search.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Needed a time or space transition.

Did not get that you were doing three different threads in a beginning. Just thought you messed up the names until I got thrown into the third one and had to fast forward to see if they were going to come back together. I need a break so my mind gets out of the last thread.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story!!!

Wow - the thought of 3 natural women frolicking about on the beach in tiny bikinis, unashamed of their public display of pubic hair is just about the sexiest damn thing I’ve ever read. Kudos!!!!

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