All Comments on 'Ally's Ordeal'

Is there a continuation to this story? I mean, does he rape her or what happens next?

cause this was so HOT***** in fact one of the hotest stories I've read.

Thanks!

I would say this is as good as anything I have read in this genre. Really, quite brilliant! Thoroughly enjoyed (in every way) the story as it unfolded. Hot, very hot! Thank you!

As all else have said, this is a very hot story with a lots of original touches--can't wait for more!

Renee and Phillipe? Really? You even made the protagonist sound like Bella.

Good overall story but please check you grammar things as simple as he/she

And missing words. Proofread and edit as needed. On the other decent character development and attention to detail was great. descriptions and analogies were superb. Overall good story

part 2?