All Comments on 'ALMOST - Chance Encounters'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Semplement? Keyvon.

I found this story quite keyvonistique. Not too much of a Susan or Rovan or Novan aspect, but more of a Jove-esque. But, semplement, Keyvon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I, uh... thanks I guess?

Sorry Anon, I have no idea what you said. At least it sounded positive.

MePe

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Mephisto Peligari - Please write more!!!

Mephisto_PegariMephisto_Pegariabout 8 years agoAuthor

Anonymous - I did!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Excellent story as usual Mephisto, though this one is quite different. IMHO, what you tried and failed to do with Keri 1, you succeeded with this story.

I would like to read more of those quick multi-victim stories in the future. They really nail down the day-to-day life of our nameless protagonist.

doorknob22doorknob22over 6 years ago
Very perfect

Less is more. Very well done.

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I write stories with a mind control theme. Most are posted here in Literotica. Any not posted on Literotica will be posted here: http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1297006057 I am always open to comments and feedback. I do not take writing commissions or req...