All Comments on 'Almost Heaven Ch. 09'

by 99_percent_oral

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movies_maidens_n_manmeatmovies_maidens_n_manmeatabout 10 years ago
Needs a proper conclusion

This series is very good but is missing a proper ending. Why doesn't Kendall fuck the heroine in her ass what is just proper in a relationship between a black stud and a white cougar. She could suck him off after he had come in her white ass. This is Porn people

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
what the???

I agree with the other poster; ending seems very anticlimactic.

I loved the story up until now. Loved how you fleshed out the characters and especially got inside her mind to effectively get us to empathize with her (or at least I DID). Unfortunately, though, the ending just felt rather rushed and flat.

Btw, I have an acct, but can't log in with it for some odd reason, so having to use "Anonymous." 😕

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