All Comments on 'Already Gone'

A good solid burn through giving them what they want, which is the essence of comedy. Very efficient story too.

Great story, near perfect ending. MC was VERY lucky that Shannon got in touch w/ him w/ all her cheating evidence, or he might have gotten royally screwed. As it was he royally screwed up the cunt. rk

Cheating makes for great drama and fab lit fodder. In prosaic, amoral reality, it's Nature and the Universe pointing to relationships of questionable compatibility, usually born of "satisficing" in mate selection, instead of "optimizing."

Commitment yields marital longevity, regardless of quality.

"Optimizing" compatibility makes for marital satisfaction and prevents all the hand-wringing on this site.

High compatibility unions lead to commitment and fidelity, not the other way around.

Without the other drama, should Shannon and Mark have been together anyway?

What's the end game? Marital Longevity, Optimal Marital Satisfaction or just "not cheating?"

The story was okay, but man... the "talking in song" bit was butt clenching cringe. Don't ever do that again.

FIRE...............5

This was a great story! I loved how Anne schemed to get a divorce from Mark and take the house, the money in the bank, and the 401k but Mark had beat her to the punch and he finally divorced her in three years on the grounds of abandonment. He and Shannon were happy with each other. Anne had lost CJ and she did not get any of the money from Mark that she planned to get. She learned that she could not leave him because he was already gone. Five stars!!!!!

Newford9b, the word is 'disdain', not 'distain'.

She still would get half if not more. You know she wouldn't just sign the divorce unless she got half so this story is a bit too much fantasy without enough reality added in.

Bitch got what she deserved. as for cj, what a dumbfuck.

Umm pretty aureus she can get a court order to have funds returned (her 50%) and a warrant issued. And even if he disappears, he can't resurface or get hit with serious fines and other penalties. Yes he can sell the house. No he can't just donate the furniture. Well this is fiction...

"Let the buyer beware" she found out too late the shiny new replacement was a pile of crap and what she threw away was worth much more. Good story I really enjoyed how you told it. BardnotBard

Fantasy Sex is fun, but fantasy Law is not. It’s pure ignorance. Come to think of it, so is…

A different type of story. The wife that complained that her husband worked too much & ignored him then searched for an asshole to fill his place lost everything she gained from the husband- & the boy toy. She was going to leave him & took the gutless way out, but he was "already gone", 4 stars Bob

Guess Mark didn't wait long before starting up a family his new girlfriend. Kind of a goofy story IMHO, but it was kind of nice to see Anne get burned before she could shit on him.

I thoroughly enjoyed it until the last paragraph. Then the logic all fell apart. There was no way on the facts of the story that Mark could have divorced Anne on the grounds of abandonment as a way to keep all of the assets.

5 stars from Xluckylee

Too far from reality...at least in your normal state of Michigan.

I agreewithnewford9b.. u no a like. yeA write urn own dang stiry.... (now haveanicedayandaspotofteaonme.. oh andthkssssix.. 👍👁️👁️👍🤷😉😁

Quite an amusing little tale of pre-emptive striking, however I find it rather amusing to read the comments from "Anonymous" about this and that is/was wrong, can/can't be. folks it's a story , apiece of FICTION, a tale from the imagination of a talented person, something to be enjoyed, not torn to ribbons or th author castigated. What has he/she done to you to be the target for your distain? Could you do better, if so, then write one yourself

This story just gets funnier every time I read it. Love the Eagles!

It was a decent story, but nothing special. The ending was rather stupid and drug it down even more, although several mistakes in how divorce works started that descent much earlier.

And another happy ending! I enjoyed this one, Stang!!! Too bad Literotica doesn't allow bonus stars because I'd give them!

Another great story from the reality of StangStar06's universe.

The divorce makes no sense. How can he file for abandonment? He left, and besides she wasn't served. His pre-emptive strike is fictional.

To be honest stories like this make a prenuptial a mandatory tool for any Man contemplating marriage. And for me to taking everything quitting and relocating changing me name anything to keep as much of my shit away from a scheming wife🤓

@Marrity Re: Quitting his job - I'm sure that's true in real life, and as a recovering Reality Nazi, in the past I probably would have ding this for that also, but these stories exist in their own reality. In any case, I've seen other stories where the wife quits her job to get more alimony, so, "good for the goose, good for the gander!"

Luked the story. But divorce does not work like this. Quiting your job: they will just deduce your income based on your last two working years income and order you to pay. So the quiting your job thing is BS.

Again, one of SrangStar’s best.

I enjoyed this story even without dialogue & many missing details until the end. Things mentioned at the end were just not how the world works in ant state that I know of. Reality is stretched too far to be believable. 4 stars.

Bill S.

Legally, this divorce for abandonment is bullshit because he's the one who left and, even when you divorce for abandonment, you still have to try to serve the other party. That's simple due process. But it's a fun story anyway.

a great storie she got wtat she deserved.keep writing thsnknyou

5 Stars on a great story . I loved the payback and the riddles . I hope that Mark and his wife live long and prosper .

What I love about these stories are the tidbits that get dropped here and there, and you need to read carefully to catch them

For example:

"He left only a single share of stock in a company that made cheese."

The reference to squirrel jokes brought back memories of High School days, when squirrel and elephant jokes where the rage

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Great story

Much appreciated

Thank you.

Very good.

What a great BTB story. When Shannon gave Mark a heads up on what Anne was doing by cheating with CJ it was all over but the shouting, and with that knowledge Mark took all of the steps to protect himself leaving her the total sum of $3.11. For Anne like so many cheating bitches she listened to all of the wrong people didn't pay attention and got exactly what she asked for, a divorce and deserved, a big fat nothing. 5/5

Personally I thought it was a good story. Thanks for sharing it with us. I'm not to sure about the comments though, as they're usually a pretty good read. I gave it 5 out of 5 stars, just because it was set up a little differently than the usual Cheating Wives stories are.

Fuckin' great story! The bitch got what she wanted. And with the inclusion of that great Eagles song! 5 stars --Bob

LOL great song band and story. I'm moving to Winslow Arizona, LOL

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She used him to get a good life without working a minute. She found that loser asshole and was going to divorce a man that had loved greatly and gave her most everything she wanted. She turned into a slut and, not paying close attention, lost everything she had and the man that loved her. Mark found a girl to love him totally and she blessed him with the greatest gift, proudly she carried his children inside her body, she was truly his wife...

There, bitch, you got yours. Mark got his, too, a beautiful woman that loved him and their child and the oe sshe had in her oven...

Freakin' Awesome

5* story from a 5* author.

The wife was garbage! Where is the story or stories about the blonde preccess server?

Great story, made even better by working an Eagles song into it.

The best part of this was laughing at the idiots that think a Ford Mustang is a decent car.

He can't file under abandonment, when he's the one that left. And it doesn't matter if he sold the house and cleared out the bank before the divorce, she would still get half. If he has filed for divorce, then when they go before a judge, it won't go well for him. Even if he hid the money, he will be on the hook for half of the known assets when he left.

what more can I say - 5 for you again.

this is why he's my favorite writer.....no one and i mean no one gets away scot free

Click she finally sees the light. The dumb ass reap what she sows. It was great riddle about " Why do squirrels hide their nuts?" : to protect their nuts!

HKL BTB fan and RAAC under the right circumstances

I think the cheaters got off too easy!

He was the one that walked away after quitting his job and emptying his bank accounts. How could he justify filing for abandonment, when she was the one who was abandoned, never mind how much she deserved it?

One of the best BTB stories out there. This one is an all time classic.

Thank you Stangstar06, you too are one of the best.

Scores a well deserved 5/5

I liked it until the end. He left, selling the house so she couldn't continue to live there, then got a divorce on the grounds of abandonment so he could keep all his assets???

I know this is fantasy, but that is too silly for me.

Another fantastic SrtangStar story. Love the way you write, man. But it was close. If the other woman hadn't gotten in to see you, this could have been disastrous. Is it better to be good, or lucky??? the gods have smiled on you. 71/2 stars, and another Mustang. The Bear approves.

The BEAR

Had to read this again. This story has one of the best final sentences I've ever seen in a LW story.

revenge is sweet, a planned out exact revenge is better

Smart husband wins!!! Even gets a HOT, YOUNGER, TOTALLY DEVOTED woman; who is a RED HEAD!!! Bonus points!!! And ALL his hard earned money!!!

Overall, well written and good plot development. Keep up the good writing.

1 star

Women gotta stop getting boob jobs. Can't find any silicone caulk in the stores.

This is the kind of story I expect to see from SS06. Hooked from the start right on through the perfect finish. One of the best.

This story had to have been written by somebody dreaming. Things just don´t happen the way you wish. He pays the mortage but she works to make a house a home so they both hold equal value in there. This I saw happen a long time ago. The guy quit his job so he wouldn´t have to pay alimony. Well , looks like you´re going to have to get a job to start paying her share of everything you got rid off. the bank also has records of what was in there before you started preparing for this divorce. Remember, she has a judgment against you. she can come back and take whatever you have until shes paid back all you tried to steal from her. Thats real life. I know this is fiction, but please try to make it belivable. at least a little bit.

Another Stangstar classic!

That had Wile E. Coyote holding the coyote up by the throat and saying "Beep, Beep. Your Ass!" Just for the nay sayers again I'm going to assume that SS06 situated this story in our home state of Michigan. So in this case I do know some of the law at least as it was written and interpreted some decades ago. She took up with another guy and filed for divorce. Before she filed I emptied the checking account, bought some things with the money and canceled the credit cards before she could run them up and since I saw this coming I had seven uncashed paychecks set aside. I didn't have to pay alimony, ended up with the house, my car and custody of two little girls under the age of 10. She ended up marrying a child molester and lost visitation with my girls. So, who came out ahead? I think the girls and I did, the ex got what she deserved. There is an old saying, something about who lives well lives best. Now that I've read three great stories in a row, laughing almost the entire time, when my chest quits hurting I think I'll call it a night. After all it's 03:06 in the morning. Thanks, again SS06. Signed: BTW

Just two or three mentions about mustangs in a Stangstar story,unreal.

Good story

Continue with theme

What's with the young woman old dick fetish, and the fuckin cars. This is old man, blue pill shit with hedge fund, roth ira, 401k plan to get a young ho to suck a old limp dick.

Roasted, toasted & barbecued. A well deserved ending for a bitchy, witch.

5 the easy way.

StangStar06

Cheers for yet another beauty of a tale with all the right ingredients - Evil bitch wife never satisfied with her lot, saddles herself with a dumb human dildo with nil future - hubby proactive and engineering a perfect screw over of both scum. Yet no blood was spilt! Brilliant work, chief!

Bitch didn't get burned - she got ROASTED!!

The best thing about the Eagles is Joe Walsh.

I always thought he was a pompous ahole. He must have been, you don't just die from ulcerative colitis, it takes years and years of misery.

If that's not the karma train coming round I don't know what is.

Still it was a great story so no knocks on StangStar06.

spoken like a true cuckold. There is no excuse for cheating. If you don't what to be there get a fucking divorce. We are bombard everyday, women demand equal rights, but when divorce and cheating is involved. Then it becomes more about what he has than, what he did. And to me, it's morons like you that have started mens down fall. Marriage is a battle at it's best, compromise and communication are important. But keeping true to yourself is just as important because that's why they feel in love in the first place. Educated or not, no woman what's a pussy (not including lezbo's) and that's what men have become.

male perspective; guy, too good, wife, well, waiting to cheat; when women cheat, they don't seek redemption, their cheating is the redemption for them. All that about rubbing it in her face with another beauty by his side....naah that doesn't happen, not all too often. There's always a reason for a woman to cheat, but with men all they need is a little space. Usually when caught, at least among educated, gentrified people, woman is usually defiant. This is the price you pay for a highly individualistic society; there's just no accountability on the part of the individual towards the community and thus family breaks. Because modern society is all about individual freedom, and individual freedom is all about 'loneliness' eventually. This western cushy life, me, my wife, and my kids, and only postcards for my parents is what is ruining western families. Community is the key. Plus the stupid law, which no longer considers cheating an offence.

Well done!

Congrats to the author.

This story is very well written and so enjoyable to read.

5* for this great tale......and please keep writing more stories like that. The LW readers will be very happy!

Lovely,

KP

This is a well written story that had me interested until the last word.

Well done Writer!! Well done in deed!!!

This is absolutely the best story on this website !! Taken for what it is. A COMEDY !!! - A FARCE !!!

For all you nits that want to pick it apart for whatever reasons, LIGHTEN UP!!

I laughed till I cried, this writer truly has a gift for comedy.

A brillant tale! I enjoyed every word. Glad to meet another Eagles fan out there.

People are always sighting divorce laws in their comments,but they forget that not only is this fiction,but it is an alternate ,or parallel universe of the writers creation with possible different laws to what we have and know in our Real World.So to quote law and say what would happen to them really is a waste of time and effort.It's not real,don't expect it to follow real life as we know it. Also to say that he would be arrested by the judge to enforce a payment order, he would have to be where that could happen.He may not have to be in the courtroom in order for the decree to be finalized,he could even have done a name change to make it harder to find him or even have left the country,or both.

She had a man that loved and provided for her and she traded him in for worthless piece of a man. No job no ambition he wanted a sugar mama. They both lost in the end she got fat had to work for a living and C I turned into a worthless acholic

Some bitches be crazy! I knew one like that once. Thank God I wasn't dumb enough to get involved.

She had to much and it was so easy to get because he loved her .She did not loose the life she had she threw it away like last nights trash. The red head gave him love and a family so in the end Mark won. Very good story 5 plus and 2/13/17 said it correctly

Ron/mcwhorter28445@gmail.com

and art is what life is all about, TK U MLJ LV NV

must be hard being a member of the tea bag, opps I mean tea cup party!

I was married to her identical twin sister.

Excellent story. Thank you so much.

Blond hair big boobs Red nails and gold jewlery A BIMBO. She cheated she sceemed and Karma bit her in the ass. If only she had realized she had a husband that loved her and a slimeball looking for a free ride. not first or last read. Pardon me if typing not up to par full of pain pills for my back

Ron

Don't you people realize this is just a story, fiction. The facts don't have to be perfectly correct. Literary License. Get over it cause the point of the story was the Gotcha, not the money

SS06, Keep'm coming

Must be Clinton fans. Know it all which amounts to nothing. Come on down to FL and read the laws.

You are wrong. Once he moved to another state, and gained residency, he could easily file and be granted a divorce for abandonment with minimal effort.

Using Florida and my divorce as an example:

We were married, basically broke up and went our separate ways without filing for divorce. After a couple of years I decided I wanted a divorce.

The entire process took about thirty days with minimal legal help. After filing for divorce, I had to run an announcement in a local paper where I "thought" she was currently living for four weeks, and had to show proof of the announcement with a copy and receipt showing that I had paid for the announcement.

Once the announcement ran the time limit, a court date was set, I went in front of the judge, showed my proof of attempting to contact my soon to be ex, and the judge approved the divorce to be final. I had copies of the final divorce in my hands less than an hour after the hearing.

There is nothing illegal in the process, there would be no warrants for anyone's arrest, and neither spouse would have any claim to anything from the other, once the divorce is granted.

Yes, it really is that simple to get a divorce in some states.

your dumb ass failed homeroom, stick to shit you know.....like digging ditches and marrying crackheads

You can't file for divorce citing abandonment, when you are the one doing the abandoning. She may have emotionally abandoned him, but she was still there. He's the one that left, remember?

And just because he did that loving wives cliche of hiding all the money, doesn't mean she's not legally still entitled to half of it. It doesn't matter if he hid his money before or after filing for divorce, she'll still get awarded a settlement. If a judge orders him to pay and he refuses, he'll see the inside of a jail cell. His only option is to leave the country, and stay gone. If he comes back, he'll be facing an arrest warrant for contempt.

As usual, a great story. Loved it. Please keep up the great work.

You probably have heard that saying before but she really messed up a good thing. She had a husband that totally loved her and would give her anything she wanted. To bad she thought she could trade him in on a lowlife and take his money. She realized to late that she loved him too. It seems the young red head loved him more. People never learn. Really good story 5 stars plus. I caught the name of the P I and remember it from another story she was Sam's best friend and worked for the Rios agency.

Ron/ cowboyridecc@yahoo

I really enjoyed the story. Not a lot or any what they did in bed that covered 2 pages. She got what she deserved.

A point about cotinuity. What bank is open on sunday and what lawyer isn't on the back nine for future reference. Love your work please keep it up.

I like any story where the cheaters lose and the non-cheaters win. Cheaters always think that they are smarter than everybody else and I enjoy when they get their comeuppance.

A SS06 story will always have a mustang or 2 or 3, a chewing-gum process server, a stupid, stupid cheater and a non-cheating husband that wins in the end (including getting the new, better girl). Why read his stories if they are going to cause you to leave such nasty comments and disparage the author?

When I come upon stories that I do not like, I just don't read that author again. It is not the authors fault that I don't like or agree with his stories.

Please also remember that fiction is "The category of literature, drama, film, or other creative work whose content is imagined and is not necessarily based on fact"

Thank You for a good, entertaining story.

I'm always amazed by how many people read Stang stories, then complain how they're all the same.

You can't know that without reading many of his stories, so if you find his stories repetitive, DON'T KEEP READING THEM!

I don't always like Stang's stories, but at his WORST he's FAR better than the cuck crap that seems to be dominating LW lately! And why aren't they in Fetish anyway?