All Comments on 'Alternate America Ch. 01'

When you were at school, did you expect full marks and a 'well done' from the teacher for unfinished work?

So why the hell would you expect anything better here?

This could be a good story. Well writen and showing promise. Just needs finishing.

One star...... :(

Hit me in just the right way at just the right time. It's like someone else wrote what could have been one of my own fantasies. Thank you! I'd forgotten how the written word can excite & arouse. Wish there were more though.

Pretty cool. I like Sci-Fi.