All Comments on 'Alternative Sentencing'

by Clausimotto

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fakers51fakers51almost 19 years ago
This was good read

Lauren not only got a person to help clean her house she got a female sex slave to slake her thirst for sex. Wonder do court knows that she treat Cindy the way she does?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great!

This story is starting off great. I like your use of racial profanity, as it fleshes the characters out and gives a concrete face to what Cindy would be afraid of in jail. The dominance is hard, but not unrelenting. You balance it well with the rewards from Lauren. The sex and subjagation becomes even more intense when the sub begins to enjoy and willing accept the debauchery. This is a great start and I will be waiting patiently for the next installment. But...do hurry.

TwistedPlayrTwistedPlayralmost 19 years ago
Great!

This story is starting off great. I like your use of racial profanity, as it fleshes the characters out and gives a concrete face to what Cindy would be afraid of in jail. The dominance is hard, but not unrelenting. You balance it well with the rewards from Lauren. The sex and subjagation becomes even more intense when the sub begins to enjoy and willing accept the debauchery. This is a great start and I will be waiting patiently for the next installment. But...do hurry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
1 Star

Racial profanity is never need.

GRUMPY1962GRUMPY1962about 4 years ago
WOW WHAT A ROUGH STORY

THE lady who takes charge of the convicted person totally has no love or respect for that girl.

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