All Comments on 'Amber's First Step'

This was bad enough.

I know it is never easy to take the plunge and you have done pretty well for a first effort. You need to improve, but you will do that by writing more - and ignoring the unkind comments of those who are unwilling even to put a name to their little hate-filled comments. Please continue to write for us and have three stars for a good effort. Tank you and welcome to Literotica.