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Anonymousover 16 years agofocus
You need to keep track of your characters. Who is present
and who is not.
At one place you had Zelda speaking instead of her mother,
when zelda was her fathers birthday party.
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gordon_a@gordon_aI am a freelance copy editor of business publications such as newsletters, in-house magazines and quarterly mutual fund reports. Many of the Literotica stories are a bit too "wham bam" for my taste and I decided I could do better than some, drawing on experiences e...
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