All Comments on 'An Adventurous Threesome'

Great. Will there be another part?

Loved the story, but it is in need of some serious proofreading/editing help. There were multiple wording errors that should have been caught by proofreading.

One example, from the next to last sentence: "...Sarah didn't wanted him to herself for the day." Say what?

I AM MRS KUNDAN G PARAKH,I AM VERY OPEN MINDED HOUSEWIFE I LAID MY BEAUTIFUL DAUGHTER TO MY LOVER HE FUCK WE REALLEY ENJOY EVERY EXPECT OF LIFE WITH MY LOVER SANJAY ROY I WILL GIVE MY DAUGHTER TO SANJAY TO MARRIES AND ENJOY WE THREE OF US. I LOVE TO READ THIS STORIES AND FELL VERY SEXEY.

MRS KUNDAN G PARAKH

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