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Click here"We're not going to Florida tomorrow, Sophia." Luke responded. "I have to keep you and the others safe." He looked at the sleeping Anna, her face bruised and bloodied, and felt the guilt wash over him. "We're going home first thing in the morning and putting all this craziness behind us. They can just launch the damn thing without us." Luke managed to put a little smile on his face as he took Sophia's hand and played with the gold and diamond engagement ring on her third finger. "Besides, we have a wedding to plan."
- COMMENTS
monkeybones420over 4 years agoOk awesome story. But really she gets away with the money ! No tracer on the bag ?
No cops? weres his security . Just here have some money.
RockStarGodover 6 years agoAuthorNow THAT'S constructive criticism! I had no idea that Mein or Meine wasn't gender neutral. Thanks for the lesson and I'll take my 50 lashes wearing lederhosen, please. Hopefully you enjoyed the story regardless of my ignorance. Seriously, thanks for the correction.
Anonymousover 6 years agoIt's mein Herr & meine Dame. Meine is reserved for females. Meine Herr grates as much as if you had writen: He are a count
Irreverent1over 6 years ago$25 million dollars rarely ever assembles in one place anymore because most bank transactions are electronic now. Impossible for one person to carry that amount of cash as it would be a palette full of cash and weigh half a ton.
Not sure how familiar you are with Las Vegas casino security measures but they are fairly airtight. Those suites have dedicated elevators banks and stairwells that sit behind guarded entrance points for both guests and staff. Dedicated staff and security guards that work only those areas and know each other by sight are allowed into those sections so even the “Bill is out sick so I’m filling in” crap doesn’t work. Access lists are strictly adhered to.
No security team worthy of the name would have a single man on guard at any one time. That’s Hollywood fantasy. Most security details of billionaires are former military, most probably special forces or equivalent supplemental training, and no military posts a single guard to high value entities. Their training won’t even allow them to.
What sort of moron wants to make an enemy of a billionaire anyway? Let’s say they had gotten away with the whole thing, we’re talking about people that have the kind of cash to put up a bounty on your head of a hundred million dollars and think nothing of it. There’s a reason why this isn’t a common crime. The money they have can draw some decidedly deadly mercenary types that will hunt you down and skin you alive if that’s the order given.
You were doing pretty good until this chapter. Sort of went off the rails here. Otherwise I enjoy the series
FormerReaderover 6 years agoAs a retired bank teller, I have to point out that we will need to add money to the author's list of "story liberties". Since 1952 the largest bill that can be used by the general population is $100 bills. The $25 million would therefore require 25 THOUSAND $100 bills. Luke would have needed a truck to haul it. Even IF the government allowed the use of the larger T-bills (NOT Likely), the nearest Federal Reserve Bank to Las Vegas is San Francisco California. There is no way it could have been arranged in time.
arrowglassover 6 years agoWhen she went off without security, I wondered. Wish the wife and the other killers got their just desserts. Will she be appearing again as a new enemy with money and a need for revenge as she sees it? With his resources, he should be able to find her...a woman with new wealth?
Anonymousover 6 years agoI like the story and its development, but am sick of you calling Anna the "blonde bombshell"!!
