by Valiant
Sweet, naughty, delicious, decedant, and most of all AROUSING.............Ohhhhhhh.....mmmmmmm..........can't wait for the next installment.
A great feel of building anticipation and tension, and of course excitement. Really sweet and powerful little story. Makes me wish for something similar, but alas I'm not a nurse! The combination of the known and unknown, the advantage the Dominant initially has through his memory and intimate chats with the little nurse add piquancy. Shame he had to have a bike accident before they could actually meet.
Maybe now 'Louise' is less shy you could write another version ;-)