All Comments on 'An Arduous Affair Pt. 03'

I like how this story is building up. You feel that you have an idea of what is to come, but then something unexpected comes up. I also enjoyed the layered character sketching of the protagonist, John; and the prolonged action, of course! Given the juncture at which John is right now, I can't wait for the next part to see how you conclude this saga. Bring Part 4 on now!

Please finish!!