All Comments on 'An Early Morning Encounter'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
perfect

i always read the new posts. rarely find one so good written as this one. this is truly erotic. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Just being picky.

Very good, I liked it. Just noted that a favourite word of yours is mutter. Author quirks can sometimes get in the way of a storyline. I really liked it, as the rest was well written, though at times a 'his' was written as 'him'. These are just thinks that a grammar nerd shirks at. Great job though :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I'm hard now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
perfectly written

Makes me yern for a guy like this :p

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Well done. But I couldn’t keep from wondering when the pancakes started to burn.

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Hello there, I am an Indian and also currently living in India. I am an ardent fan and also a voracious reader of romantic fiction. And this is my first attempt at writing erotica. Hopefully, you will enjoy reading my submissions here. Looking forward to your feedback and c...