All Comments on 'An Education'

by Darkredvelvet

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
could have

The full story could very easily have been written without any anal sex and it would be far better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wrong Goddess used

The only real objection I have to your story is that you used Aphrodite as a reference. Aphrodite was the GREEK not Roman Goddess of love and beauty. The proper one to use would have been Venus.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Name

If this is really Ancient Rome, the cousin's name would have been Alerius, not Alerio.

Pretty well written, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

In Ancient Rome they would never refer to the Goddess of Love as Aphrodite. Her name is Venus. Aphrodite is her Greek name.

brandnewpetbrandnewpetover 11 years ago
So sad...

...I would have loved to read the continuation. This definitely leaves me wanting more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This was so good, it's a shame you never continued with it, I would love to have read the rest!

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