All Comments on 'An Erotic Short: Hubby's Birthday'

by Cheekie2Love

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Pretty short story...

but you built up the premise nicely, if economically. Very hot IMHO. Perhaps this premise could be revisited with all the onlookers being allowed to jerk off onto her body afterward...?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Thank you

Super hot. Nicely done. Please write more.

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