All Comments on 'An Evening to Remember'

a great story for a first time writter hope to hearmore

very nice. maybe there could be more??

Terrific first try! Hope to read more of your work soon.

stupid story no girl would allow her brother to fuck her like that she would yell and kick him and if he did fuck her and she was so upset she sure wouldn't have allowed her boyfriend anywhere near her keep it sounding believable

me more sick than licking someones shit hole. The thought that reading about doing it would excite someone is equally difficult

For a first time writer, this is an excellent effort! I felt that the story was developing nicely but it feels unfinished. I really hope you continue this and we get to see more of your work soon!

Great story, well written too. Do more! I want them to actually hook up, like she gets pregnant from it and when she finds out its his baby or something like that